Good short film. You said it was based on a real story. Maybe you could have given a bit more detail such as "In [year] in [country], [leader] held court on religion. Anyone who believed in Jesus Christ was considered an enemy of the state and faced harsh punishment. Here is how many believed it happened" or something to that effect.
I thought the opening titles were intriguing,but it then deterioated.I agree the music was well suited,but it should have been faded out and the rest left to effects.It dragged at the end.As with most Moviestorm creations imaginative editing was lacking.