Used Cars (48hrfp submission)

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alteregotrip (3109 days ago)
creative spooky premise.. interestingly done, but it feels like you rushed it too much.. no complaints but that.
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keithlawrence (3119 days ago)
Wow, this was great (and scary, but I´m to proud to admit it)
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dean240 (3120 days ago)
awesome stuff corthew ... very intriguing...
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squirrelygirl (3120 days ago)
Nice! Very creepy. :)
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Nahton (3120 days ago)
Great job Corthew. I know how frustrating it can be when things don't turn out exactly as you'd like them to but in this case I think you are being way too hard on yourself. Sure, your desired tweaks may have enhanced the movie some but to the casual viewer it stands up as a creepy, well executed piece. You pulled of a couple of nice effects along the way well.
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From: corthew
Joined: 05/11/2010
Movies: 56
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Added: 3114 days ago
Category: Horror
This is what got submitted. Several changes would have been made had I been able to spend the last ten hours tweaking rough areas rather than struggling to get this inferior product to render.

The background music cuts out at the end leaving the viewer in uncomfortable silence that should have been the old style music playing out.
Some of the background music elements worked better than others and would have been extended to replace the less desirable ones.
The dialogue of the old man after he steps out into the hall would have either been removed or altered to not reveal what was about to happen.
Several of the old man's randomly generated body movements would have been eliminated or changed to fit the scene.
The sphere at the top of the transmitter tower would have had textures alternated between bright red and dark dull red to simulate blinking.
These would have been simple fixes to implement but I was unable to get a fully playable initial copy even up to the very end.
I managed to get one done the morning after the deadline by disabling all startup programs but after rendering this copy with the 48hrfp title screen I'm doubtful that had anything to do with it since I followed the same steps to prep my computer for this render and again lost the final few seconds of background music.
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