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#1 drabdelfattah

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Posted 22 November 2017 - 12:57 PM

this is my first project in my youtube channel 

I hope u like it 

it is about schizophrenic patients 

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#2 jamoram62

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Posted 22 November 2017 - 03:54 PM

Pretty good indeed. Nevertheless, subtitle font is a bit too small, sometimes it's hard to read them and IMHO they should stay a bit longer on the screen.

 

Also, it's against the Community Guidelines posting the same topic in multiple forums (see points 6.1 thru 6.3)

 

 

 

 


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#3 primaveranz

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Posted 23 November 2017 - 06:44 AM

Well done! Interesting topic.

I felt the music was a little bit over-dramatic in places but there are some nice cinematographic touches in there, so keep it up. I look forward to your next movie ;)


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Posted 24 November 2017 - 10:27 AM

 

I felt the music was a little bit over-dramatic in places but there are some nice cinematographic touches in there, so keep it up.

 

Didn't notice, but that might be because I watched the movie with the audio muted :)   As a matter of fact, I enjoy watching movies with no audio for better appreciating its purely cinematographic virtues and visual language, without the support of or interference from other elements, and try to learn from someone else's work in the process. It seldom works, though :D


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