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#1 squirrelygirl

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 08:47 AM

Okay, this is my first movie. The sound's a little...well...you'll see.
Hope you like it :mrgreen: Let me know what you think. If you think I could've done something better please let me know, I know you can't learn if you don't know what you did wrong.

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#2 roguevirus

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 09:08 AM

you forgot the link

[size=18]MOVIE LINK HERE http://www.moviestor...Servlet?id=2159


hi buddy good stuff the old classic rules speech from scream ...but well reworked ..great first movie


voice acting was great (if a little low volume for me at least) .....the characters scratch to much this can be turned off by unticking improvise (i think).

anyways good job

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#3 squirrelygirl

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 09:17 AM

I thought they scratched too much too. Must be the itching powder lol. Thanks for the heads up on no improv. :mrgreen:

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#4 squirrelygirl

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 09:19 AM

Thanks for the link too. You've been an awsome help to me! tongue.gif

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#5 act3scene24

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 11:32 AM

This is quite a job! Especially for a first movie. Hope to see more from you soon. The only criticisms I know of have already been said by roguevirus. Great job! smile.gif


#6 squirrelygirl

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 11:34 AM

Thank you very much Act! :mrgreen: I think Puppy Love is awsome! You put a lot of work into it, and believe me I know that!

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#7 Nahton

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 03:03 PM

That was a humorous, well acted short! I can't wait to see more from you.

I have to learn to turn off the improv's as well. I am not sure I see any value in them.

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 03:11 PM

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That was a humorous, well acted short! I can't wait to see more from you. I have to learn to turn off the improv's as well. I am not sure I see any value in them.


Well, if nothing else it was a butt scratching good time, right? lol.Thanks for the great comment. I've tried to do drama, but darling it simply doesn't suit me at all. smile.gif

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#9 willshetterly

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 04:47 PM

Improvs can be useful for background characters in casual situations, like parties or club scenes. I wish there were more settings for improvs, or ways to customize them: itchiness is almost always a distraction.

#10 squirrelygirl

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 01:03 AM

I'll definently remember to turn it off, if I can, or at least turn off their sounds. At least it was a comedy. :mrgreen:

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#11 Yarmond

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 02:19 AM

Well done squirrelygirl! good voice acting and very humorous. There are a couple "jitters" in your camera work, but that comes with time. Keeping making movies!!! smile.gif

#12 squirrelygirl

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 05:12 AM

Thank you! Yeah, the camera angles are hard to get used to. :mrgreen:

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#13 lisa_n005

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 05:26 AM

I thought it was very good. Keep up the good work!

#14 squirrelygirl

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 11:10 AM

Thank you lisa :mrgreen:

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#15 Synnah

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 11:53 AM

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Improvs can be useful for background characters in casual situations, like parties or club scenes. I wish there were more settings for improvs, or ways to customize them: itchiness is almost always a distraction.

We're currently tweaking the improv system to make it all slightly more believable. This means we're taking out pretty much all of the scratching, and anything that makes a noise.

In response to your video, squirrelygirl, I'd recommend recording all your vocals in an external editor (Specifically Audacity), so that you can boost the volume levels. Or, if you still want to use Moviestorm to record them, you can edit the volume levels after you've recorded them. The audio files can be found in C:\Documents and Settings\[Username]\Moviestorm\Movies\[MovieName]\Dialogue in Windows XP. Aside from those two things, you movie's looking good!
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#16 squirrelygirl

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 11:57 AM

Thank you! I'm not sure if I got things down enough to try a seperate audio system, but I'll save it for then. Thanks for the heads up on the ability to change the audio levels in moviestorm. :mrgreen:

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